All Comments on 'Redemption Ch. 02'

by LevanaHyll

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Funny. But good.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

umm I find this interesting I hope you continue this I would like to see where this story goes

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
uh oooh

Boy u in trouble aaa there's typos but i do,not remember where. Im glad the boy rayne thing is taking its time. I personaly hope they form a happy lil trio n such. After all tbe troubles that havent surfaced yet pass though. Oh boy. But that's me.- megz

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Sometimes I think Lucien is too hot... He's like the ultimate messed up bad boyfriend that could make you do literally anything with a mere suggestion. Makes one revert to thought processes long ago left behind for what's actually good for you. Love him to bits. I didn't think I'd like boy Rayne from the teaser story you did ages ago, but I really do. Girl Rayne I'm still trying to get a handle on. I like that the person who Lucien lands up connecting with is Zac- it's so unexpected in a way, but it makes sense at the same time that it would be easier for those two to get along.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
More!

More please! Reluctantly waiting oatiently for more on this story! I follow you on fb but you haven't updated anything about Redemption :( Is everything okay? LW

LevanaHyllLevanaHyllalmost 10 years agoAuthor
Sorry :'(

Haven't been able to work on chapter 3 for the past 2 weeks. My husband has been very sick and has just been diagnosed with Polycythemia Vera. He's been in excruciating pain. I will finish the chapter, maybe just upload what I have, but it's hard to write when your man is practically writhing in pain next to you. Haven't even turned the laptop on. That would be mean of me, so I've just been playing nurse and we've been doing research on the condition. Again, my apologies to all.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
im so sorry

leva im so sorry and i wish ur husband all the best and i hope he recovers........ take all the time you need .... family before anything... - kyriae

SweetRapunzelSweetRapunzelalmost 10 years ago
:)

Don't wanna go through cold turkey or hanging by my finger nails soooo I will not read this chapter and the rest untill the last chapter is post. I want to read it in one go. So when the time come please let me know when it's the last chapter. Thanks luv keep smiling and fighting with everyday life obsticals that come in to your ways to make you stronger and develop your mind and soul. When you are feeling down or feel like hitting the walls both in work or health issues etc. just listen to positive song like Stonger by Kelly C (?)....lots of love + bear hugssssss ^_________^

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