All Comments on 'Redemption Ch. 09'

by LevanaHyll

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
this totally sucked

Because it was only 3 pages long! Gah! Really excited that now girl rayne is finally with them. Anxiously waiting next chapter 8)

KyriaeKyriaeover 9 years ago
HEAVENNNNN

Leva.. thank you love.. if i could kiss you i would... This is what I needed and you wrote it perfectly...Finally Lucien is cracking towards Boy and it is beautiful to witness.. I love the fact girl has gotten grit and can put lucien in his place... this trio will be hot together

Thanks for the A/N at the beginning.. made me smile and squeal .. had persons lookin at me strange.... my boy.....(sigh) Home is with Lucien... Perfect

WickedwrathchildWickedwrathchildover 9 years ago
Perfect Again 5 Stars.

5 stars of 5 again I will give you nothing less.

LevanaHyllLevanaHyllover 9 years agoAuthor
chapter 10

was just uploaded Sunday, sept 14, 2014 at 11:20 pm. I might upload a preview of it on my website if anyone is interested at a sneak peek. But don't forget to log back in here on Wed or Thurs to cast your vote and leave a comment whether you loved or hated. If I don't know whats wrong with the story I can't try to make it better. Of course, the scores are surprisingly high when I thought most people would hate this story because the main character is into bdsm and the threesome and the bisexuality theme going on here. Unfortunately not too many comments which saddens me more than the scores make me perk up.

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