All Comments on 'Redemption Ch. 13'

Lol, Levana, I think this is one weird "WTF Happened" episode, with sooo many things happening at the same time with no sure answers till the next chapter. I'm sure a lot of us reader are asking the same questions like: (1) How did Lucien get to the same dimension as where his Raynes currently are?; (2) Clearly, the two brothers are not yet dead but where the heck are they? (The indifference of their loved ones are getting to me); and (3) Who the heck was the female reaper and what was her mission? Right. I'll be sitting there by the corner and again wait patiently for the next chapter hehehe. There was one part in the story that bothers me though: Offer Boy Rayne some pussy and all is is forgiven? Gah! Shouldn't there be a bit of a cold-shoulder treatment more before that happened (like in the next chapter perhaps?) Again, dear Levana, we understand that life gets the best of us but pls., don't rush this potentially great story too much. We are willing to wait because we knew from the start, what an awesomely, talented writer you are and your stories are undeniably, one of the best in Literotica. Take time to smell the roses and think more about how to deepen the plot by explaining some of the missing details. (I hate to speculate, can't you tell? Lol). Thank you for putting out another excellent read. See you in the next chapters! Xoxoxo

1) Lucien fell through a portal that leads to one of the gates of Hell. His stepfather was a Satanist, if you didn't get that from Boy's weird glimpse into Lucien's past. Mal año and his cult followers built the mansion directlctly over one of Hell's gates. The only way to get to the actual gate is to traverse a portal which takes you to a different dimension. The corridors between dimensions is full of spirits, some good, most not, hence the "don't look to the sides. Looking at one of these creatures makes them aware because suddenly you are aware and they pull you in with them, forever lost in purgatory or they possess you. 2) can't say where Dev and Luce are yet, but remember, the Alpha Angels planned something. Remi or Seth, don't remember which now tol Girl they were completing their mission. Part of the mission also includes Seth now trying to find Ozzy. 3) the female reaper is the appointed one to guard said portal to the Gate. Let me see if I can explain the portals. Their are different parallel universes. Some of them are exactly the same, but have different life forms living there. If you open one in your bedroom, let's say, you might see a double of yourself but a male version-of you. Or a purple version of you, or someone or something else. They were at Lucien's childhood home but in a different dimension. That's why when Davariel went through the portal in Megdoluc, he had his wings again. When he and Lucy come back, because they will, he won't have his wings anymore, for a while. Hope I answered all your questions :)

About Boy-what would happen if you scold or put a kid in time out? Let's say a five year old...they'd get mad, right? Now, what would happen if you offered that five year old some of their favorite candy? They'd probably look at you with a pout, but take the candy anyway. Boy isn't your average adult alien. His persona is very much like a child. He's sweet, but don't forget also part animal instincts. His animal instincts dictate he mount a willing female if one presents herself to him. Again thanks for asking. I love explaining, also let's me know that when I do the final edits I need to make all this more plain to the reader so they understand what's going on. :)

Thank you!

I uploaded Redemption's final chapter and epilogue last night at about 2am. So I'm guessing Wednesday. Thanks to everyone who voted and commented :)

It's going up in group sex because Lucien and his Raynes finally get it on.

You're the best 💯

Jenny

Loved it (taty)