All Comments on 'Redheaded Beauty'

I like the story a lot. It seems a bit rushed and the plot is very short. If you continue with the story, which i hope you do, i would love to see more of what happened to Chance and the redhead.

I caught myself in what I realized later was déja vu, when it was revealed that the red-headed woman was a ghost. After reading that the men never saw her again, I wondered if Etienne's experience would be any different.

But, then, to discover the server's story about the ghost, I wondered if Etienne would find himself seduced by her, or another of the hotel staff. I still do.....

Five stars, and a hope for a second chapter in the story.

Nice story, but one editing note. Opaque means NOT transparent or translucent.

... nonhuman is not my preferred category but this was definitely interesting. I'd love to see the story continue. Perhaps why the wives left if he was so good-hearted and a good lover? Is he the exception that sees Rebecca twice or more? Why is he really called Chance? What is in the future with Ashley? What is the nature of the draining? Does he get his writing Mojo back?

would be nice if it went on.

Nicely done.

I enjoyed this story. Thanks for sharing.

that make the tale so intriguing.