by Scotsman69
Scotsman -- so sorry that I missed this story when it first posted! I've been looking every day and someone didn't see it. I am definitely interested in knowing what happens next between Red and Sandy. They seemed to be forming such a deep connection, that it just can't be all over with!
<br><Br>I truly enjoy your style of writing -- the way you incorporate the sights he is showing her, some history and background, with their passionate affair. I also love how they frequently can barely keep their hands off each other in the midst of their daily travels! I look forward to more of your stories :)
Beautifully handled right to that incredibly urgent, hot and erotic ending. Too good. Waiting for the remainder…I have just stumbled across your writing, and I am more than impressed.
Please please write some more! This is a riveting and addictive story. Still waiting for more! Every word and every detail is perfect. Love all the interesting details, and the facts too: history, architecture, land and geography...as well as the irresistible dialect. Well done!
You write such a heady mix of factual detail and hot and heavy sex that I feel quite faint! And they call this Romance? Wow! Sorry it had to end, though. What now?
Scotsman -- it's a fabulous story. It's filled with intensity and passion, and suffused with sweet romance. I do love that Sandy ... <smiling>
I know the client is always right but I would have preferred if Sandy had continued to wear his green knickers with his kilt. I have always found that a girl reaching up my kilt to pull down my green knickers increases the erotic sensation.
Brilliant story, will look for more of yours with kilted fucking in them.
Anon. It's based on RL experiences, but not autobiographical.
A well written, detailed story. I couldn't stop reading it. It touched me in all the right places.
As a full-time kiltie,I agree that Sandy should have kept his greeners on. So easy to whip the equipment down the leg for a kilted quickie. Best of all if the lassie's kilted as well!