All Comments on 'Redwood Nine Ch. 09'

This story has gotten better and better with each chapter. Loving it!!!

I liked how you brought that all together and explained it. Marlene is quite the character, but you make her fit in nicely with the rest of the story. Nice read so far, keep it up.

Lance

To the anon fan who has enjoyed 1 bombing every chapter. Despite your attempts at lowering my scores, to make your story appear higher in score, it doesn't make your story better than mine, it just means you can't write well enough yet to acquire those scores and that ranking. Every low score you give, is reversed to the original score, because the owners know my stories didn't deserve that score.

Spite and malice are not the ways to improve your writing skills, nor are they showing anything good about yourself as a person. I earned my points and ranking through hard work and practise, not diminishing another person's hard work.