All Comments on 'Reformation Ch. 17'

What happened? Are you getting input from someone else as to this stories direction. Why are these two slaves doing things behind Owen's back? We all know from the story up to this point even Veronica would not have the nerve to enslave Rebecca without talking to Owen. And there is no way that Rosina would hide the fact that she may be pregnant from Owen. Are you taking too long between chapters? Please get back on track.

IF you had quit. Interesting Chapter hope to see them more often. Really enjoy the story

interesting...i could see how taking a break from the story could refresh your writing.. somehow i knew that the story had taken a turning point where one needed to rethink the direction of the plot. it was enjoyable to see that it did not take you that long to get back into writing the story. I am looking forward to seeing the next chapter and following along.. keep up the good work.

While I agree with the person who stated that Rosina would never hide anything from Owen, and that Veronica would talk to Owen first, there are significant reasons for this straying from their usual behaviour. For Rosina, she is terrified that Owen, who has always said that she could never bear his child, will make her abort it. To bear Owen's child is a longstanding dream, and she is torn between her devotion to Owen and protecting her unborn child. Veroncia knows she is screwing up but can't help heself, she has convinced herself that she is doing this for Owen and to protect him from the skitish Rebecca, but in truth she needs to explore dominating a woman, and the temptation with Rebecca was too great. She is also torn

Finally, I was hoping Rosina would get pregnant chapters ago. Rosina is my favourite character in this story and she absolutely Idolise and loves Owen. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️