by pseudonym2005
Definitely had more fun with Adam Cross. The copy/pasted passages were boring of course. And the male gaze in the whole story makes me wonder what good it is to write as a couple. Lady, slap him across the face and have him snap out of it! This one was a bummer as much as Adam Cross was a refreshing success..
Apart from some errors in spelling, Rekindled is an exceptionally fine story. It is, in fact, a riveting and blazing drama, full of twists and turns on the path to true love. The author thankfully builds the plot carefully rather than in haste, as some authors do. While classified as Erotic Couplings, it really should be classified as Romance. As such, it is one of the finest Romance stories around. Five stars.
That was a very enjoyable read,the rest of my body thanks my eyes over,and over,and over! Defintely my Best Read here!(the moisture in my eyes when I finished reading pushed it over the top) I lost count of the times I had the need to .....
Satisfaction Personified!!
Great story that I needed to find right now. Thanks again, obviously I loved it!
This is definitely one to run with. The story was beautiful and written with such detail. You both are great writers and story tellers.
This story was simply the most erotic thing I have ever read. It was hard to keep my hands from wandering to my lady-spot. I look forward to reading more of your work!
All the descriptions were vivid, and the characters had depth. <3 it!
I struggled to keep my hands from wandering as I read this. Thank you!
Posolutely , absatively, beautiful! I seldom read "erotic couplings", but if many of the stories are like this, that may change. Good show! Cheers!
This is one of the best erotic stories that I have ever read! Added into Favorites!
Only found two problems with homonyms (waist when you meant waste, chalk when you meant chock). Otherwise your stories are amazingly well written, with the right balance of character and eroticism. I look forward to more!
One of the greatest stories I've ever read. So well written and well done. The characters were so likable. The story was romantic and passionate. The scenes were kinky but still passionate and romantic with loving, happy sex and lovemaking.
Ethan was definitely a favorite character. Karma came back for him big time at the end.
It was a good ending, I'm glad things worked out for Todd and Vanessa. Absolutely amazing. I hope you do more stories like this.
Great story with some fun characters. How did Ethan end up in an orgy? There is a story there.
Beside this being a very nicely written story, it is also ooozing sex. Well done and my thanks!