All Comments on 'Relax, Mrs. Vine'

*grins*

Very interesting story. Would love to see what happens next..... Do you have plans for making this a series? *grins* Keep up the good writing.

do continue this pls...;ppp

Thats a very good score from me . loved it more please. refreshingly different.

Be careful to separate scenes though. You went from her talking to Christine to her going to the massage without any break and it briefly lost me

Another promising story! I hope you continue it, I like the scifi genre and the story is intriguing. Will you be updating your other story as well??

Thanks for the positive feedback. Anonymous- I don't know if I will be continuing this story, but I am working on Fairy Ties.

Which makes the story beyond the description very erotic. Would be interesting to hear more about why the sexes were to be segregated in the setup (in a succinct way of course, so we can get to the sex part :))

I agree with the other reviewer who said the jump cut from her partner Christine going into the other room to her talking to the sexy receptionist a bit startling.

Possibly better suited for the Sci/Fi crowd? This was nasty.