All Comments on 'Remembered Desires'

really difficult read. it's a weird mixtures of short pointless sentences (seemingly someone gave you a fear of run-on sentences so you've gone the other direction) and a number of overly wordy sentences.

e.g. she got home. the garage door was closed. the front door was locked... see how annoying that is?

That's a pretty hot tale!

That was really hot and you should definitely go on to another chapter and add chloe to it!

Didn't you make this same comment--the exact same wording--shortly after the story was published?

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks.

Yes, I wrote that story with the intention of writing more chapters. And, Chole will be included. But, at the moment, I am involved in writing a non-erotic novel. It takes up much of my time. But we'll see. Thanks.

I hope you get back to this story. There are some quality mother/daughter sex stories. But not nearly enough. The notion of mom Carrie carrying on with her daughters Caitlin and Chloe is absolutely fuckliscious! The threesome with Jim could also be provocative. How many guys wish they could have sex with both mother and daughter at the same time? More than a few! And a longer story is a plus!

Love this story. Hope you continue with the sharing and the younger daughter. Very Hot Indeed.5++

Thanks rosspal. I'm glad you liked the story. Also, I have gotten a lot of people wanting me to expand on this story. I guess I'm going to have to. I just don't know when I can get to it.

Good stuff, but then I like all your stories, so no surprise.

Love the start......