by amber_now26
Like being a 'bug on the wall' or finding a secret diary. Very well written and totally believable. I don't ever fault women loving women.....I love 'em too!!
I am a straight, middle-aged, married man, and I have read hundreds of lesbian stories on this site. This story is, by far, the most believable, tender, moving story I have ever read here ... and that is saying a lot! Your story didn't just arouse me, it MOVED me. What a wonderful gift you have given your readers by sharing this personal tale with us. Your writing is simultaneously humorous, poignant, and so visually descriptive ... I felt like I was in the room with you, watching every gentle move. Bravo! They say "write what you know". Well, my dear, you have done a fabulous job at that!
Of course this story was really hot, and yes, I'm going to go upstairs and have a nice cock-stroking session while I think about it some more. But first I want to tell you how much I liked your voice. You're a real writer, and someone I imagine I'd actually like to meet, if the world were arranged that way (I don't pursue online relationships, for many reasons). Thanks very much for sharing this.
Thank you for sharing your work and life with us! You have a wonderful ability for writing. As others have said before, a great blend of real human emotion and eroticism that lets everyone love this story! A MWM, with lesbian friends, you have the ability to show how much all of us are like each other in our needs for love. revrnd09@yahoo.com
This story puts most so-called erotic writing to shame. Amazing!
Hmmmm You've Told Such A Sweet Firts Lesbian Love Story.
Have You Tried To Find / Reconnect With Karen Since She Went Out East To College ?
Thank You For Sharing Such A Lovely 'n Sweet Story
Kisses
Kathy
You have a gift. The story was exceptionally well written with good grammar and an excellent style.