by ms72vt
Well written, good character development and believable-rare in these parts...
This was so wonderful, it makes my heart pain that Renee and Kyle were seperated. Very rare, and quite practical — mostly in these type of stories the "lonely" wife and the "lover" make it through. This was practical she wanted "One More Night" with Kyle just as a fond memory, but she still loved her husband, and kids.
The seperation was painful, yet obvious. I'm not sure if there'll be more chapter(s) but I'd love to read more. Again, it was a wonderful story, and I always enjoy your work. Looking forward for more.
That was beautiful. I'm worse-off than Kyle and can only hope to find such a person.
A poignant, sad, bitter sweet story that pulls at the reader's emotions.