All Comments on 'Renewed Vows'

I agree that group sex would have been the more appropriate category. When I chose romance, I wanted readers to focus more on the love that the characters felt for each other than the sex act with strangers. I see that it didn't come across that way. Thank you both for your comments. Always appreciated.

I can see the romance, but I still think it'd be more of a group sex story.

Decently written, but perhaps in the wrong category? Nothing terribly "romantic" here...