by ozebicouple
WOW! What a great first story. The mix of tale and sex was outstanding. A little editing for form and spelling, but all in all I was dripping. Do continue the story.
Well done mate.
Fun Story to read, As it was well written, and hotter than the outback. Kept thinking about Dundee! (Yum!) Aussies are hot! Keep writing, mate, I put this one on Favorites!
Would have been a much hotter story if you'd put the dialoge in correctly. Other than that pretty good...
Just happened across this author and story. Really enjoyed it a lot. Am jealous of your openly bi relationship with your wife and congratulate you on your good luck. I'm also bi and have had similar unexpected sex wit a male friend, in fact i have that story posted. I'd really like to see a follow-up story when you, Jan, and your friend get together.