by coaster2
I am a sucker for stories that actually feature conversations between people. You do it well and this chapter was excellent in showing us the feelings that grow between two people as they are attracted to each other.
Now, what happened at the door? Drat, have to wait for the next chapter, which fortunately should not be long in coming.
Love it the suspence mounts! What is next? Waiting on next chapter.. Keepem comin. Thanks for sharing your talent with us.
Just when everything was looking up for the two of them. I have my fingers crossed.
It's very, very nice feeling that despite the cliffhanger, another chapter will appear soon.
GE
Two lonely and damaged people who need each other. Bravo on a fine story.
Thw leads have us likeing them and suddenly disaster strikes!
It sounds like a heart attack, but~~
Jerry in Washington state, USA - I haven't yet found the time to check SOL for the full story, but I'll have to make the time today - I just can't wait until tomorrow to see what comes up next. As with most of your other stories, I connect well with your main characters and find myself pulling for their happy ending. I'm very much hoping for a happy ending on this one - although the possible stroke / heart attack has me concerned. Thanks once again for your excellent storytelling - I find myself swept along with the events you share and am always disappointed that your latest chapter / story has ended - no matter how much I enjoy the journey.
So I'm cheating. I can't wait til tomorrow, so I'm going over to the darkside. I'm going to SOL, which I didn't know about, & will read the rest of this absolutely great story. See that's how awesome you are. Also, as a woman, when you attempt to write from a woman's point of view, I personally think you succeed, admirably.