All Comments on 'Rest Stop Voyeurs'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Ridiculous

Started off good, but you lost the plot somewhere along the line. It could have been a great story, but ended up being one of the worst I've read.

JacquelineGeorgeJacquelineGeorgeover 15 years ago
Guns and violence - how American!

I thought the writer was doing quite well at first. The hole-in-the-ground was bit silly, but then, we don't insist on absolute reality in our fantasies.

And then the story went off in orgy of guns and violence, even extreme violence by the 'hero'. As a foreigner, this sort of thing really grates. Shaking my head in disbelief...

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Stupid mon, really stupid!

Yo give’a baad name to tha queers mon, yo do. Come outa yo closet and take one or two up the chute to soften, feel tha vibe mon, will make yo mo sensitive to tha shiit.

Do it, do it, just do it, mon

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