All Comments on 'Revenge'

Overall, not bad. Except that the ending was beyond realistic or plausible. MAYBE a salvaging of the relationship with Janet could be presented as a reasonable possibility, but for all four to be willing to maintain the status quo is pure fantasy. (Yeah, I got it; the whole thing is fantasy. But the essence of good fiction is to retain at least a plausible scenario.)

my 2¢, KK in Texas

It did seem more like group sex than non-consent.

If they had gone after his anus that would have been

a different story but what they did only enhanced the

previous relationships.

I enjoyed this story but I feel this is a bit too much like a movie from the late '60's or early '70's called, "Three in the Attic." In that movie, there were three rather than four girls, but they found out the guy was seeing all of them and decided to get even. They kept him prisoner for the entire summer vacation (between college years), fucking him into submission and to keep him weak. He got to the point that they were wearing him out. He definitely learned his lesson. Yours was a good story except that four girls starting out angry and jealous are really going to stay that way! I don't buy the ending. Thanks for writing.

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You must really think a lot of yourself! 4 girls....and they want to keep their relationship with him???!!!!! GET REAL!!!! He was an ass to think he could get away with doing 4 girls at the same time but they were adults and there were no commitments.

I could see the story going in a different direction! They keep him bound and tortured for the whole weekend. He refuses to eat and pisses on himself and the bed he's in. They finally release him. He goes to the cops and tells them what happened and files a complaint against them and has them arrested for kidnapping, unlawful restraint and torture. Take the story from there.

Of course, your fantasy is about your self and 4 women who want to keep fucking you.

WHAT AN ASS.

middle school level?

It's a good thing that this author cheats on the scoring or this story would have a much lower rating.

Good take well told.

Needs a follow where one girl goes psycho

They should have gotten a strap on and been pegging him during the whole time. Then when the got tired of him kicked him out.

This story sucked boring as hell