Revenge?

Yup! Liked this one. 5 stars...

Very nice story. Well done and presented without flaws. Thank you for a great read.

Good fantasy stroke material. I generally liked it and I offer, what I hope to be, helpful criticism from here on. The characters were a little two-dimensional, but having lived in farm country they were probably more believable to me than they may be to others. (Country girls...!) I had to step out of the story to justify the "I've had engine work done but can't afford gas" thing; IMO it should have been explained/inferred in the story that the work was probably done before he became a med student rather than deduced logically by the reader. Also, and this is certainly open for debate, unless mannerisms of speech are integral to the story or the character, dialogue should be more grammatically correct, as if being remembered while retelling the story rather than being acted in front of a camera. Not a show-stopper, but the less the reader has to stop and interpret, the easier the story flows and more enjoyable the read. Having said that, I did enjoy reading it. I haven't checked the author's other work yet, but I look forward to doing so.

its a treat story, but personally i feel it needs more. thanks for a good read.

Damn

This was a strange tale. I guess the kid had a lot of un. Now he has to grow up.