All Comments on 'Revenge Inc. Noel'

It is just begging for a second chapter. As always enjoyed your writing, keep them comming and I will keep reading.

Mike from Texas

this endi,leaves a lot to desired! finish the darn thing!!!!

rich .........

BUT IT DAMNED SURE NEEDS SOMETHING REALLY BADLY!!!

Black humor in parts - which is all the better -

Nice work yet again - this has the makings of a good series and a fun challenge to keep it working and fresh -

Charlie's Angels of retribution - .

Victor Lims-downtown Detroit had one in the mid sixtys went there on prom night. Thanks for sharing a good read,

More please!

And no indication of a chapter 2 or a follow-up story. It's cute the way they both think alike but never tell each other what they're thinking. Ex-wife says she's sorry but no detail of what the background story is. Too many unfinished storylines. Would be a really good story if all the loose ends we're tied up.

Cost you a point