All Comments on 'Revenge of the Nerd Ch. 02'

by rpsuch

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bruce22bruce22over 13 years ago
At the same high quality level as ever

Lots of personality development here and good dialog. It is nice to have a published author contributing to our site.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
No need

Thought the first (and complete?) version was very good. Don't see a need to modify anything or split it in shorter parts. The only thing I would appreciate, I think, is another chapter in addition to your first version.

GimletEdgeGimletEdgeover 13 years ago
Really enjoyed the earlier version.

It will be great to see how you're modifying it after a few years.

Will be looking forward enthusiastically for your chapters yet to come.

GE

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