All Comments on 'Revenge of the Nerd Ch. 15'

This is really fun but God awful 1 page chapters!

sounds like the whole thing is winding down to a boring nothing

I really hate ur 1 pg per chapter

I thought the last line was beautiful.

Fun Story, Thanks!

The additions to this story are so awesome. I'm so glad you decided to start it up again!

She is now indentifying him with her orgasms, she is lost!

It would have more continuity if the chapters were a bit longer. In fact, somehow I missed 13 & 14 and only realized it when I was completely lost starting chapter 15. However, some of the dialog is great and I like the story and the perspective of the amazingly hot female, who is out of her league.

..the continuity is suffering because of the abruptness of the story length. There is almost no flow

a little longer