All Comments on 'Revenge of the Nerd Ch. 50'

While our intrepid heroine is still suffering from self-doubt -about this, that and the other- Jeff keeps putting his all into this relationship, and she struggles to find a stronger way to say "I love you", failing to realize that that "I love you" is all he needs. I love this story!

let's see: lit.=literature? erotica=we all know that. this story is 90% character development, maybe 10% erotica, and 110% great. if someone desires more "erotica" , there are plenty of contributors who offer "stroke" stories. if someone wants worthwhile reading, they read this and a few other really good authors.

I love how much this story causes me to look up concepts. It is really helpful considering how much more interested I am in this than I am in my English class. Learning happily has to be much more effective.

I also agree with the other Anony-Mouse. This deserves to be someplace so much better. You ought to move it to a more professional site, or publish it, although I don't suppose the plot has such a great hook for the synopsis. Oh well, brilliance doesn't have to be in a shiny package.

Love the story, can't wait to finish,

~Crystal

Dude has anyone ever told ya this site's called lit-"erotica". Apart from just plain-fucking-annoying one page chapters, where the fuck is the erotica in all this shit??

Another great chapter RP.We'll be waiting for tomorrows as promised. Keep up the good work.Ciao.

I enjoyed this chapter, the best for awhile! thanks

Good chapter but Jeff should know that Harvard did a study on chicken soup,

and it does help a person get over colds and the flu if you can keep it down.

love your work ~ this chapter however is the best in awhile = )