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"Jeff," I implored.
"I just thought it would be easier to take down from above."
That established his bona fides as a smart ass to those who didn't already know him.
He removed it and tossed it high up in the air. Rich managed to snag it.
"So, Rich, does this give you any ideas?" asked Jeff.
"Jeff!" I scolded. I was saying that a lot.
"Yes, it does," said Rich.
He walked over to Jen and got down on one knee. Jen's eyes bulged with shock. The room went silent. He held up the garter.
"Want to trade? You can probably use this more than I can."
"Did you put him up to this?" She pointed at Jeff.
"To quote Tallulah Bankhead, ‘I'm pure as the driven slush.'"
At around 10:30 I told Jeff I was ready to go.
"It's kind of early. Is there anything wrong?"
"No. I've had a wonderful wedding. Now we have a marriage to consummate."
"My memory may be fuzzy, but didn't we take care of that little detail in advance?"
"You can never consummate too often."
"So, did you get your fairytale wedding?" he asked.
"No. It was even better. I couldn't have imagined anything so wonderful."
When we arrived downstairs I was about to ask the doorman to have our limo brought to the door. He smiled and pointed outside where it was already idling.
As we got in I asked the driver how he knew we would leave early.
"Believe it or not … I anticipated your departure."
"Believe it or not?" I asked with ample doubt.
"It's on YouTube," he answered.
I turned to Jeff. "Is this going to be our life?"
He shrugged. "It looks like it's going to be quite an adventure."
I put my arms around him and leaned in closer. "I wouldn't have it any other way."
- COMMENTS
Anonymous11 days agoI enjoyed the story and I thought it was very creative plot. I've never read the story here on literatica where the father is the villain. Read a lot of father daughter incest, or villain stepfather, but never a birth father villain to his daughter. I felt the ending problem of the wedding not happening, was weak. Not sure what could have been a better idea? But after all of her love and trust and belief in the sevant nerds problem solving and him basically worshiping her. 2 days before the wedding, she believed her dad he cheated on her?! She basically disliked and and knew Dad was out to end the marriage? Nice story, Better than the typical nerd pretty girl story.
pezzheaddazzler3 months agoGreat story I enjoyed it immensely add the rest of the story as they grow older together!
Anonymous9 months agoGreat story, one of the best on this web-site, but what happened to Candy? She was the first person who discovered Jeff and was "addicted" to him, yet suspiciously completely absent from the story. Would have been interesting if there was some kind of competition between her and Ashley.
AnotherChapter11 months agoThis is, if you will excuse the pun, more than a Fine story! Well crafted, humorous, with the requisite villain, genius, and heroine who is just flawed enough to still be almost endearing while being simultaneously revolting. The biggest flaw was in endless short chapters. Combining them, as was done in the initial instance, would have resulted in 8 chapters rather than 85 and would have made reading the story a much less arduous process.
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Thebiff12 months agoA great story which I thoroughly enjoyed. Five stars all the way but I would have preferred fewer chapters to make reading easier.
Lokikatabout 1 year agoOne of the best series out there. I have read and re-read this multiple times, and it still gets me.
Have you thought of a series for Sandy?
joeking1over 1 year agoI say this with the preface that a) I loved this story and b) I don't write nearly as well so I recognize a limit on my right to complain. Having said that, given that the initial story (which was 6 pages) turned into 11 chapters, it would suggest that the 84 published chapters could have been consolidated into 7-10 chapters to improve the flow, and potentially highlight areas which could be edited to remove repetitive story concepts. I would also contend that given that these chapters appear to have been published nearly daily, it would suggest that the consolidation could have been done without markedly drawing out the time to each follow up (which I recognize may have been a consideration for those who were reading this in real time as it was published).
