All Comments on 'Ribbon'

by midwestyankee

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MastersWenchMastersWenchabout 9 years ago
Wonderful Start!

I really enjoyed what I hope is only the beginning of this story. Unique angle, and nicely written! This really left me wanting more.

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nthusiasticnthusiasticabout 9 years ago
Yummy!

She's not the only one dripping wet! More, pretty please, maybe a longer chapter next time? Soon, I hope?

SaucyminxSaucyminxabout 9 years ago
Lovely

You had me at Callebaut, Yank. Nicely written, and very tidy. I can't wait to read more. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Excellent!

I love it, MWY! What happens next??

silverwhispersilverwhisperabout 9 years ago
well craftted

excellent craftsmanship, good tension. i was reminded of anais nin while reading.

Endless_NightEndless_Nightabout 9 years ago

The way you set the scene, so casual, yet so deeply intimated, is masterful.

Not to mention crazy hot!!!

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