by Colleen Thomas
I loved Emily's slow character development. I can't wait for a sequel when Dee and her friends go rescue Rachel and Donna
Gripping from start to finish. Great plot and character development. More please!
...the story line is familiar, one of Ms. Thomas' favorites, but she always gets the most out of it. Even for those who don't like "butch with strap-on rescues/seduces poor, abused femme girl" stories, one cannot deny Ms. Thomas' wonderful story-telling ability. She gives us nearly perfect prose.
And yes, the story of Rachel and Donna's rescue would be greatly welcome. So many possibilities. Please write it for us, Colleen!
As always, Colleen, your work was well worth the wait. I'm always looking for your submissions when I come online, and always will be.
I really enjoyed it. I word love to read part to. When all the lovely biker ladies teach emily's friends a few things.
Thank You
Sure, there are only a few basic plots we can all identify with;the heroic rescue is one. The art lies in telling the story in a believable and honest setting. This one works! In spades! Thanks.
The writing is very good (as always from Colleen), the development smooth and the sex scenes nicely done. Not rushed. Nice ending. I loved reading it.
If there's a Part 2, that'd be fantastic of course, but the current ending seems just so logical and clear that I wouldn't mind if there weren't a follow-on.
Thanks!
Always expect the best from you, and you always deliver. Perfectly crafted, compelling stories and characters, rich plot, and all the rest.
Ignore the moron who said it was typical lez crap... when you think about it, most everything there is to write about, has been written, however you find ways to put nice twists and new meanings to them all. Turning even a "common" story line, into a great story! Please keep it up... thank you again!
How is it that people can't just enjoy a fantastically written story? I loved the wind whipping over my body, the vibrations running up through my twitchy sex, the conundrum of giving over, the safety found there. Who gives a damn if it's been done before. It's never been done quite like this and I'll be back to read it again, no doubt. Sequel, shmequel... It stands alone and rocks.
~lucky
Lil Bit,
Your stories never cease to amaze me in how wonderfully they are put together. You work truly is incredible.
*HUGS*
Another Colly (soon to be) classic. I was excited at the mention of my home town in there too. Romance and ass kicking, a very daring piece.
Colly's stories, as always please while not being fluff. I loved the lead up, the way Colly took time to make her characters a bit more than the normal 2D ones most stores seem to feature. Thankfully, it's a bonus to be found in all of Colly's stories :) Most importantly, while the story was hot, it also roused high emotion in me, especially when Emily was helped in the club and then when Dee came to get her.
Keep them coming, Colly :)
Wow, another great story. I love how you take the time for an actual story to develope. It's not just all about sex and its not fast. You are truely talented.
Great job CT! I love all your writings. I think you are a very talented woman. Few and far between can I find an author that actually develops a good plot with believable characters. I always feel like I am viewing each scene right before my eyes. Keep up the good work hun!
I'm not a long story reader, but you my dear...held me captive through the entire story!!! It's envigorating to read something so realistic. Please....NEVER stop writting love!!!
Can't remember if I've read your stories before, but I really liked this one...I liked the story line which gave a context to the sexual byplay that was very nice & sexy...Terrific!!
Beautifully written story Colly. Great build up and extremely well written as usual. It really is good to read an erotic writer who can build a plot line through the story.
well written believable story excuse me while I go wash up...LOL
Colleen-
That was great! You really know how to get a girl going...
-Talie
another great story by you. I wish they didn't end most of the time. Your stories all make me do the same thing though; bring my fists up and then down and say YES! Really dorky, i know.
Def going to bookmark this one... I hope you publish your work 'cause I'd buy it in a heartbeat.
and I am happily married to a man but the way you spin a tale is amazing even more than the sex!
Keep up the great work! I hope there will be a Chapter 2 soon!
Freakin love this story. You should write another part for this.
Darling Colleen passed a way a few years back. <3
... or a pissed off lez biker. They will seriously fuck you up! 'Specially when you deserve it as much as those three pukes did.
But it ain't even for Keith, yet. Karma's a real bitch, too.
Wait'll he does his first prison stint.
Loved the story, btw. ;-)
... for my comment on "Lez Bikers".
I realized that it could seem offensive to some people, and I assure you, that was not my intent. Just a way of saying it, and I should've known better, having actually known some, a long time ago.
Men, ok not in general, but enough out beating women, drinking, taking drugs, killing, fighting , just name it ….. Sickness and those are no news, happens since the humans learned to move on two legs and still happen and will be happen and the most sickening outcome of all, WAR
And i thought we human are able to learn from our past, our failures ….. bullshit
✨✨✨✨✨🌸☘️ I know you will receive the message CT Namaste