All Comments on 'Riding the Red Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
more

more soon please a very good read

vampwrrrvampwrrrabout 11 years agoAuthor
:P

The next chapter is already up (though I found a glaring error and had to submit an update to it just now), and I submitted chapter 9 last night. *grins*

quicktofightquicktofightabout 11 years ago
My favorite story!!!

Three chapters at once? A dream come true! Love your writing, as always.

cantfightfatecantfightfateabout 11 years ago
A bit too much focus on the cooking for me but

I'm really enjoying the connection between the characters. And did you have to stop it in such a place??

Luckily for me, I'm behind a chapter and don't have to wait in suspense!

spearishspearishabout 11 years ago
A cookery book.

I seriously think this needs a new section and that this isn't the site for it .We are no nearer knowing what's going on but I now have a recipe for a gallete??? Whilst well written albeit with way too much food in it ,its becoming annoying .No sex even by chapter 7 ??

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
I love the cooking...

I think it helps the story along and has made me hungry all afternoon!

i also love the story.

Exx

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