All Comments on 'Rights and Wrongs Ch. 01'

I just Love, True Love..

Story telling!

does he get knocked up or does her sister find out?

So realistic, it makes me want to believe its a true story. Good job!

I do hope that there will be more chapters. I know the title has Ch. 01, but many a tale here has died without a following Ch. 02 or more. And as a previous commenter said, it is exciting to let the imagination wander, and that this is a true story; it was so much fun!

This story is at least 6 stars!

I admit it, I have a particular fondness for mom-son stories told from the mother's POV and you continue to demonstrate a real flair for this genre. A worthy addition to your previous works - good interplay between the mom and son, with just the right amount of tension and build-up. Thanks for your hard work. Already looking forward to your next submission.

That was Hot!

Thank you. Five from me, and I seldom award five.

Very erotic, believable, well-written, and hot - boner-inducing.

"Ma" strikes me as the basic, fundamental name a boy has for his beloved mother. I love it when a boy yells "Ma!" as he's blowing his young balls up his mother's cunt.

that was wonderfully arousing all the way through the story. holding me in a passion rarely experienced in these stories. your wonderful

loved the long, slow build up bringing them ever so close to crossing the uncrossable line.

and then when they crossed it, pure lust and emotion jumped off the page.

well done.

Amazing piece of writing. A real turn on

Georgie girl. Nicely done.

Delightful story with a sinfully slow buildup and a very erotic climax! Looking anxiously towards Chapter 2!

Anything I say would just be repeating what has already been posted by others. It was believable. No exaggerated body dimensions; huge breasts or baseballs bats for cocks. You left that to out imagination. Except for her breasts. Which I love small ones like that. It had the desired effect on me!

The storyline and the pace of the story was awesome, and the eventual sex between mom and son was so loving and erotic.

It seemed that there were more between them, than just lust and raw sex, as it seemed to be a real deep love.

I am surprised that mom could last five months without taking a long weekend and visiting her young stud lover and becoming reacquainted with him.

I was so wanting mom five months later, to be standing naked in front of her bedroom mirror rubbing her swollen belly that was getting bigger every day from the baby her son has given her..

This is just a very wonderful story that is well written and edited.

Thanks for the good read.

I enjoyed the story and made me remember when I was with my son.

I enjoyed the way the Mom tested her son , With mine we were swimming in the pool and things slipped and showed more then the breasts. We still share our pleasure . As I said it reminded me of the good times.

You and he nailed it ! Thanks for the notice of this posting. Whatever happened to a break in the term?

Thanks Don

You have expressed the feelings so well that I feel that I am just repeating what others have said already. Sinfully Looking forward to the next parts

Venus

This was a thinking persons story. I love how you took the premiss and ran with it from shy to brazen. From indecisive to totally focused. Nice tension. I also liked the believability the tale carried with it. I really can't wait to see where this goes. Wonderful job!

Nice and easy story about true love. Good luck with the contest.

Starting a serries I hope, can't wait.

I'd love to read a story about a 60ish mom & a 40ish son realizing they lusted for each other since ...who finally get together sexually.

Great job. You had a nice set-up and good storyline. This was much better then most stories, where both partners are more then willing to go at it. It's more erotic when one or both have a little reluctance. And I'm always a fan of the mother's perspective.

any news when the next part comes out? i rly liked this story!

I don't normally read this category, but this story is well drafted and was almost believable. The first one I have enjoyed, well done.

Please get to work on the next chapter, this story could get really hot. Mom and Son that's all they need , Please don't add any outsiders. Please keep this a PURE incest story....................Thanks for a great read 30

I love the way you show your characters and have lovely conversations.

Mary

Oh god yes another great story with depth and not just wham bam. Had me so hard reading it. Keep up the great work

wooow wat an absolute beauty nothing sexier than a slow build up and a powerful exploding climax to a mom son episode im ur fan

A PREGNANCY

This is how incest erotica is written well. The mental side of this genre is even more important than the physical. A good story tells us about how the characters are thinking. The guilt, the taboo, the thrill, the danger. Characters that fall into incest are doing something extremely powerful but it's also complicated. The feelings are not simple. As good as it feels there is supposed to be elements of guilt and doubt. They are supposed to look over their shoulders and be worried about getting caught.

That is why I love this chapter and this entire series. This author does an excellent job of exploring the mental side of this which makes for very stimulating reading.

First rate. Thanks.

This is some of the best writing I have ever read in any category.

I read your stories in the order they appear on your submissions page. Not by date. Just when I think your stories couldn't get any better, I come across this story. What a great story by a wonderful author. Your ability to tell a story is unsurpassed. Thank you very much for writing this.

Warren

I generally don't get into this kind of story, but this is really hot. The writing is some of the best I've seen on literotica and story is very good. I'm a fan of yours.

Wow smooth story line. It came as if u writing directly from your experienced memory lane. No modesty. Sheer honesty n truth n belivable conflict of mind. Enjoyed reading. Keep writing. Waiting to read balance chapters.

Loved how you told how her mind was working to rationalize her ultimate desire.Sometimes enough "wrongs" can indeed make things "right", Right ?

This was the first story of yours that I've read and there's no question but that I'm now going to read them all and I think I will also visit Amazon.

Thank you for several cums tonight and I suspect many more to come.

So erotic and well written. Mom took right approach to everything.

Thank You for this Delicious Treat!!!