All Comments on 'Ripe Fruit'

I really liked this!! A lot of young love, first time passion. It really turned me on!!!!!

Young love. First time for both. Nobody hurt. Very tenderly told. A nice story with some more stories just awaiting. Good story.

Very erotic, sensual. I wish everyone's first time could be so beautiful.

Really sweet but sexy too. Wonderful!

That's the best story I've read on this site (or any others) in a very, very long time. Damnnnnnnn goooooooddddd !!!

O.k. I really liked this story. Great characters, good description - very cute the shy way they have sex but..

she's such a bitch to use him for sex but then again he's a willing participant.

So well written that this surely can't be your first story?<P>

A nice touch and flow without tawdry inflections. Just very well done<P>

Thanks Author - I hope to see more credible work from you at interval.<P>

With High Regard

This is a tale of SWEET YOUNG SEX, a couple caring for each other with true (if sudden) feelings. Both horny young people are very attractive -- even without much description beyond pubic hair. I like it a LOT!

So realistic and beautifully told. The lack of vulgarity and extreme discriptions make me wonder if the author is really a guy! If not, this is some great writing!

You're great, but make them a liiiitle bit longer.

Alice (21)

Love this. I like the interction of the characters and their lines. Keep writing more first time stories.

Great story most of us boys have lusted after the prettiest girl in school, but this guy made it - well done!

That was amazing! Job well done!

Well done story.