All Comments on 'Risk'

...on Literotica SPELL???

If you’re on a bicycle, you pedal. Not peddle.

Past tense pedaled. Not peddled.

I swear, I’ve taught 12-year-olds who could spell better. And they didn’t think of themselves as writers...

But please, use punctuation marks!

Wonderful and romantic and real, very real...despite the fetish. I loved it and will read your stories again...

Well-written, enjoyable enough--but not really romantic enough for my tastes. Should this not have gone in the 'Fetish' category?

Ah well... :-)

Where can i get one of them ?

Have not seen a better Romance Story. The characters Believable, well, to a point, the problems well-handled, the 'joyousness' of the family equally so.

Easy on the eye, the story was, with no jarring errors, which really would trip up the reader.

Cheers & Congrats

Kilroy