All Comments on 'Risky Business'

about the sexual orientation of your primary character. It did not take much more to unerstand that this was a gay story hiding under a different category. I normally give the lowest score for the writers who hide their story under false colors to try to get non-gender readers.

This is a wonderful story!! I think you've done a great job of presenting the ideas of the character(s). Orientation is on the very periphery (if it's that close) of what's going on with the rest of the story. Don't pay any attention to the "nay-sayers". Keep up the great work!!

This is a wonderful story!! I think you've done a great job of presenting the ideas of the character(s). Orientation is on the very periphery (if it's that close) of what's going on with the rest of the story. Don't pay any attention to the "nay-sayers". Keep up the great work!!

A good start,interesting theme, good plot....but the end was anything but satisfying...if one can speak of a proper end . one or two more paragraphs would have done the trick

I liked it, it sucked me in, and then it ended abruptly. As a result, it left me feeling disappointed.if more is on the way, I will happily retract that one criticism.