Rita's Bet Ch. 03

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My parents were angry, of course, but just as much at me as at Rhiannon and her family. Nothing came of their wrath (except that I got grounded until after winter break! I counted myself lucky: it would have been until graduation if either of them had seen me come through the door bare-assed naked and covered in egg slime).

When I finally returned to school on Thursday I held my head as high as I could. There was no need for me to explain why my head was shaved bare, why the faint marks of humiliating comments were still barely visible on my entirely smooth, hairless head. Why my eyebrows were absent. The story had already been told and re-told hundreds of time before I walked through the entry doors. Because I had not been present for three days some rumors had gotten out of hand regarding just what had been done to me and how bad I looked. But the essence of the story was largely sound: that I looked as I did because I had bet on our football team in the Thanksgiving Day game; that I had bet my hair on our team emerging from the game victorious. That I had bet my hair and lost.

My squad mates were outraged. Not so much at the fact that I was bald: they each understood about making bets and that there are consequences to losing. (I had witnessed one of them once topless, on her knees, and sucking the dick of a boy she'd lost a bet to at a party.) But they were incensed by what they had heard about the way the payment of my bet had been carried out, irate at the unnecessary humiliation and degradation that I had suffered in front of the audience Rhiannon had gathered. Most of what they had heard was mostly true, and I told them in detail just what had happened. It was mortifying both to recall and to relate. But I thought they deserved the entire and true story.

I had thought the tale of my risking and losing and paying so much because of school spirit might cut some ice. And some of the students in my school supported me, both by telling me my bald appearance looked good (even hot!) and by telling me how they admired me for having honored my bet.

But truthfully on some days and in some of our hallways I was the object of just as much mocking and derision as I would have been walking with my bald head down a hallway at West. I even had to withstand the humiliation of snickers that, in spite of all efforts, had slipped out of a few of my teachers.

I would just put my chin down and proceed on my way.

By the time I returned from spring break in the middle of March my hair had grown back in enough to be styled to some degree. By graduation I had a handsome, albeit shorter, coiffure. People began to forget.

But I never have. Seventeen Thanksgivings ago, and I still remember every detail. They stand out in my mind, each recollection honed into intense detail on the sharp edge of abject humiliation.

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toastywarm01toastywarm0123 days ago

First I need to tell you that a large group of anonymous posters asked me to submit their many complaints about this story. They hated that there was no sex in the story and they wanted to know why Rita didn’t bash in the heads of all the people at the party and not allowed them to tie her up. They also asked for you to write the story differently and give it a better ending. None of the anonymous posters had ever written a story and some could not put together a comprehensible sentence.

As for me, I absolutely loved this tale! I wasn’t expecting a head shave story and when it became evident that this was going to happen I was dying with excitement. And then at the end when she got stripped nearly naked as well I almost lost it! This was the perfect story for me. I will come back and read it again and again.

And really I know what you mean about the anonymous posters. They attack my stories all the time.

wanderinggipsywanderinggipsyover 6 years ago
End POV of Rita going through post humiliation trauma,very well portrayed!!

End POV of Rita very authentic of a dire humiliation victim!! The barbs of intense mockery aimed at her...or even the passage of time, which never let her forget those traumatic moments ever!!...something like the plight of ragging victims when the ragging isn't so fun!!

fzoid44fzoid44about 12 years ago
I'll spell it out for you

Here's the part from the very first part of the series -

" 'No,' she said. 'No, something else just came to mind.' But again I got that sense that whatever she was leading to had come to mind before this minute. 'Not a card game,' she seemed to muse. 'Mmmmm. How about a bet?' she asked.

'Well, on what?' I asked in return.

'The homecoming game is coming up this Thursday,' she offered."

Very, very clearly, they were betting on the outcome of the homecoming event. What was wagered? The author doesn't have them say, because the wages are spelled out in great detail throughout the rest of the story. The author assumes you will be able to figure out what the wages are when Rita has to go over there and get her head shaved by the mob of students from the winning school.

screwuppscrewuppover 12 years ago

" Just a quick note in response to your comment to Rita's Bet, Chapter 3. Apparently what you missed were the first two chapters. If you're reading chapter 3 then there is going to be a chapter 1 and a chapter 2. It helps to start at the beginning. I'm just sayin ".

Ok to the nameless coward that just e mailed the above to me.

I read parts one and two and it doesn t say what the bet was i still don t know what the bet wss waiting to hear back from the writer;she ll tell me i hope - does anyone want to help me add a part four revenge would be soooo sweet after 17 years - later . .

screwuppscrewuppover 12 years ago
Ok What Bet

Ok i reread this 2x i don t see what the bet was so what have i missed ? ?

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