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by Selena_Kitt

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Exactly how I feel about my husband...

jiminabjiminababout 13 years ago
Beautiful

Thank you for that. It was beautiful. Like you, as you said at the start I also have a problem with words and I would like to pass all these feelings to my wife. Maybe I should cut and paste your words. LOL Thanks Jim

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Well

I have read most of your stories and you write with such passion..such pure emotion. It's beautiful, please keep sharing

jack_strawjack_strawalmost 18 years ago
very very nice

I'm going to give the Deutchlander below the benefit of the doubt and blame his cluelessness on an inability to understand the subtlties of the English language.

He might not get it, but those of us who've been in long-term loving marriages and have a working relationship with writing in English know exactly what you're saying here.

This was almost poetic in its sensuality, as you try to express what you're feeling for your lover. And the beauty of it is that I'm not sure you really succeed in fully expressing what's in your heart. It's just too much to grasp, but it sure is fun trying.

A great work of art from a very skilled writer.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Very Impressive Authoress

That was as sensuously touching as anything I have read here.

It is very likely this comes from your own experience and that you are both very lucky.

With Very High Regard

luvtoread_660luvtoread_660almost 18 years ago
The truth is always beautiful

Thank you for sharing it with us.

duddle146duddle146almost 18 years ago
Tender heartfelt Story

Your lovely word-pictures tug at the heart. The sweetest confession of all - that of the love felt between a husband and wife. If love is blind - well, you just pulled back the curtain.

SEVERUSMAXSEVERUSMAXalmost 18 years ago
This MUST be mentioned on the AH.

This one is a real tear-jerker. Her feelings are unmistakable. I don't know why she shared it, but I'm glad that she did. One thing is sure, her husband would HAVE to know that he is loved after reading this, if he didn't already. It is both romantic and erotic. Not much else to say, except that she earned an undeniable 5 on this one. Excellent letter, SK.

scriptordelectoscriptordelectoalmost 18 years ago
Poignant!

That was incredibly moving! You have a way of conveying a passion larger than life with grace and eloquence. Thank You for sharing it with us.

Aurora BlackAurora Blackalmost 18 years ago
Oh Wow...

You've got me crying over here! Damn, Selena. This was so beautiful and heartfelt, and it touched me deeply. Every woman should be this happy. Have a great anniversary!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Oh

That's so sweet, and loving.

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