All Comments on 'Road Show'

use spellcheck or have someone check it for you

It isn't just spelling mistakes, it's grammar errors, missing punctuation, correctly spelled words that aren't the word intended... All of which makes it very difficult to read.

Please write a second installment!!

If I wanted it perfect I'd ask for it. This was great story and love it the way it is homer.

I've noticed that many, MANY of the stories in this category, tho set in the US, are penned by British authors. It's obvious because of spelling & word choices (it's a dessert CART, not a dessert trolley, for instance - but kudos for saying "panties" and not "knickers"). Finding a US based beta-reader would not only help with the spelling & grammar issues others have remarked on, but it would also help keep the characters "in voice" for where they're supposed to be.