All Comments on 'Road Trip Rogue Ch. 05'

This story started out good, but has fizzled the last couple chapters. The whole getting caught part made it hot, now they have paula watching out for them and they don't even fully fuck? And of course their spouses are fucking in the pool and OZZie is watching? Kind of boring. I had hoped for more. Usually love your work, but a bit disappointed with this one.

Migrated from LW for better score what a yellow bellied writer

Just mindless rutting Has ceased to be erotic. Put a bullet it it.

These people are not each others friends. They remind me of the adage "with friends like that, who needs enemies?". And Paula is just a crude bitch who evidently gets off on screwing up other people's marriages. There is really nothing very entertaining about reading about consenting adults fucking if there are no complications, so if you have plans for confrontation, jealousy, or something, I suggest you get on with it.

People complaining are crazy, can't you see a three couple swap coming? Can't wait for next chapter

. Still waiting to see what Ozzie is going to do. Enjoying the story. You have me coming back every day to see what's next. Right now I think we all know how it's going to end up. Hope were not disappointed and we get to see how Ozzie is going to motive the women.

can't wait for

next chapter

You probably lost a lot of readers. Or in the non existent a slut is born section.

Keep it coming!

Better with every chapter. Keep that idea rolling along.