All Comments on 'Road Trip Rogue Ch. 07'

Discrete fun between friends is ok, but turning this into a swingers orgy? No Paula dont!

Took a turn not expected. I wished for more than having the party fizzle.. Hoped a bit more storyline development on ellens part. Was this the end? If not, I will see where it goes. Till now I really liked the plot and the writing.

If this was the end of the story I'm very disappointed. This story started off to be a very good read, but slowly has gone down hill. I'm hoping this isn't the end with more to come.

Fuck the pregnancy how about for the next episode sharing the love yep would be great for this arsehole to share aids with his cheating sluts

I am very glad that nothing had been going on between Ellen and Robert. First, it would be too coincidental that both partners were cheating with their friend's spouse. Sevond, it is more appealing if there is one rogue that is going over the lines and screwing his friend's wives behind their backs. A free for all where they swing goes too far. I like the one arrogant cheater and the spouses having no clue. I also like that they did not disparage their actual spouses and laugh about how clueless they are. I am glad that she didn't get pregnant and pass the baby off as her husband's child. Cruelty is not sexy ...at least to many women readers. It is enough of a turnoff to stop all arousal. I'm very glad the story ended as it did.

Now for the epilogue: fuckwit hubby and his gal pals (Sharon with the loose twat and Paula the dyke gets syphilis, no home no money cause the wife takes his balls to the cleaners in the divorce. Becomes gay to feed his 2 women and his 10 intellectually handicapped kids (suffering from their fathers disease). Awesome Rogue trip NOT

For God's sake (and mine): --- Get a motel room!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!A8A7

Very good writing. Don't know if you had an editor or self edited, but whoever did a great job, as I can't remember any errors that usually distract the reader. The descriptions of the back seat sex between Sharon & Ellen's husband were incredibly erotic. It felt like I was there. I love your writing style and the fact that your story didn't take forever to read. A beautiful job & hot !! Thanks. A 4, could have been a 5 with a little more sex between their spouses. Just my opinion. 😊