by SlamDuncan
A well written tender love story with HOT sex. Thanks for a great read. I look forward to more from you.
Mandy
Another chapter in the ongoing adventures of the Quinn family. I love all your work, Slam. You really appreciate women.
Ok. Five
But - the way it reads, her thong, "...covered her breasts just above the nipples."
A classic misplaced modifier. :-)