All Comments on 'Rob and Susie'

by SlamDuncan

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Beautiful story!

A well written tender love story with HOT sex. Thanks for a great read. I look forward to more from you.

Mandy

MissFeatherclitMissFeatherclitabout 11 years ago
Another winner

Another chapter in the ongoing adventures of the Quinn family. I love all your work, Slam. You really appreciate women.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Big thong!

Ok. Five

But - the way it reads, her thong, "...covered her breasts just above the nipples."

A classic misplaced modifier. :-)

Anonymous
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