All Comments on 'Robinson Family Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I had been looking to rereading this story it took a long time to find it again

FirebatFirebatalmost 11 years ago
Haha

This is entertaining. :P

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Too short

I agree with golf.

golfadikt2golfadikt2almost 15 years ago
Didn't feel like a complete chapter...

Great start for a story... nice build up.

Now for the bad news... I don't think it felt like a complete chapter. I would have preferred you to write the next part and post it with this part to assist me in reading a complete story. This made me feel like I read a much-hyped tv show only to discover that the first episode only had the build up with no climax or plot.

I'm anxious to read the next part

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftalmost 15 years ago
If Only

I wish that was my family. Great start, Please continue

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftalmost 15 years ago
If Only

I wish that was my family. Great start, Please continue

kevswickkevswickalmost 15 years ago
Heating up!

Looking forward to the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Outstanding.

Great start, loved it. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Hope you write it soon.

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