by siblingspank
I had been looking to rereading this story it took a long time to find it again
Great start for a story... nice build up.
Now for the bad news... I don't think it felt like a complete chapter. I would have preferred you to write the next part and post it with this part to assist me in reading a complete story. This made me feel like I read a much-hyped tv show only to discover that the first episode only had the build up with no climax or plot.
I'm anxious to read the next part
Great start, loved it. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Hope you write it soon.