All Comments on 'Robotic Lover'

This story could have been a bit better. I not into grammal errors and such but I would suggest a editor. Also it was a little rush but a very good try thank you

I liked the story and gave it 4 stars. I agree with ONE thing the previous person commented on. It was just a little short. I am only suggesting that since the Sextroid became aroused when it sensed a naked woman, it may have been a very long night for our scientist/damsel in distress. She eventually was naked and since it was a robot, It could have kept her busy all night like that pesky Energizer Bunny... going and going and going. The other person commenting should worry more about her own grammar since it seemed many words were left out of her sentences. One other thing, and I've seen it in other author's stories too. Sometimes within the story, a character's name changes. Like in this one where she started out as Holly James.... later being called Holly West. Makes Me wonder if that little slip up is actually about a real person the author knows. Anyway, good stuff.

the sex wasn't so bad but some of the words you used made it seem more like a teenage fumble then a mature and satisfying sex act. also, this reads like dubcon, which is fine, whatever, but it comes real close to becoming noncon and unless that was your intent, you may want to look it over with a sharper eye. one last thing: the pace was, naturally, fast as this is clearly meant to be, purely, a sex scene, but i think you could do with a bit more introspection, especially since you added the part on the end, which then begs the question of what happens next.

does she confront her boss? does he confess? or did the robot really act on its own--as much as it can, according to its programming--and the boss merely take advantage of this fact and enjoyed himself? does the robot somehow recognize her as its "creator" and follow it home to "please" her? or does she take it for another spin, so to speak?

Jesus Christ! So not only did her coworkers sexually harass her, her boss decided to test out her robot by having it rape her, while he (and the coworkers?) gleefully watched!

What on earth made you think this was a good idea for a story?!!

I wonder what story the previous anon read for it to read that into this. Look like it conjured another story into this one, but so it is for the constantly offended.