All Comments on 'Rock-a-Bye Ch. 01'

by emoboi

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MilkChocolateAmazonMilkChocolateAmazonabout 16 years ago
Good start

Looking forward to the rest. It has good premise.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Can't Wait!

What a breathtaking start. I loved the dialogue when I usually just skip right to the sex! I was hoping you had more submissions to keep me satisfied until the continuation of this one but I see it's your very first. Bravo on keeping me on the edge of my seat!

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