All Comments on 'Rock the Boat'

Suddenly I have an over whelming need to go sailing.....

First, why is this in the incest category? Two, the story started out good, then went too fast after that. The dialog was silly. People don't talk like that.

Great story, especially as it appears it is your first. Ignore the detractors they seem to make a career out of cutting others down but don't identify themselves so that you can check out their writting. I comment as anon. because I am just a reader but I know good writting when I read it. I gave it a 5. Keep it up!

You have got to be kidding us right.Why is it incest ? Mother and daughter eating each other out. Daaaaaaaaaaaa. What rock did you craw under from. Please explain to us all what you consider Incest to be.

Liked the story Greeney.Hope there will be chapter 2.

However, it would benefit greatly from being properly edited.

Spell-check is not an editor.

way to rushed needs a rewrite and a good editor way to many stupid goofs that an editor or you proofreading should catch.

2.5/5

Id like to hear some of the stories of this wonderful mother daughter team. Maybe hear of their first time.

AWESOME loved it looking forward to much more to Cummmmmmmmmmm !!!

WOW, That was one hell of hot story. As I was reading, I had many mental pictures due to your style of writing. I do like your style of writing and please continue writing. I look forward to reading more from you.

Brian

What makes it even better is, it's the first post from this author.

A damn fine job and very visually exciting.

I most surely want to see more from this writer, and the explicit writing style.

Thanks very much for the fine story

Like the others said, wonderful visual imagery. I actually feel like I know these characters, have a complete picture in my mind as if I watched a video rather than read a story. Bravo!

I really hope this is the beginning of a great writer's career here - PLEASE post more

This story was awesome. I am looking forward to more fromt his author.

Loved this story, I've read it twice and can't wait to read it to my husband when he gets home. Please post more..

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