by dsoul
Other than some of the annoying spelling mistakes and a few bits of bad grammar, this is a pretty good tale. I liked the incest and got a bit of a tickle from you mentioning that the mother was momentarily jealous of her daughter's attentions to her son. The cross dressing was quite a tickle as well. Please continue to write more stories on the same exact theme except have the family in different scenarios. I would have loved it even more if the story had been longer. Keep up the good work!
Another idea: let the daughter be Dad and the son be Mom, and the parents be the kids (of opposite sex!)
wish my family understood the fun a family could have and join me and my 2 sisters were all in our teens and have playing with each other for a couple of years now but only started fucking 6 months ago but we got busted by mum and dad last week and there not happy and watching us like a hawk hopfully they have a chnge of heart soon and join us or turn a blind eye to us