All Comments on 'Romance Is for Suckers'

This was well-written but moved awfully quickly. We don't even know why our narrator had such a jaded view of romance or love. Was he burned by someone? Constantly turned down when he was younger? Watched his father run through women and did the same? I think without knowing that it's a little difficult to sympathize with our narrator. Nor do we know why he appealed to the girl. Those things would flesh out the story a lot.

It doesn't take a lot of words to tell a truth and to show the reality of it, but it does take some experience in life to be able to tell it so well and in so few words!

Too damned short. Could have been a good story.