All Comments on 'Romeo and Tre Ch. 01'

the characters are static, the dialogue is childish, and there are many grammatical errors. Also, chapter is too short. There's not even enough here to make me want to read any more of your story. Readers here might not expect perfect prose, but we don't want to be BORED!

I think it was exciting and not suffocating as most story, characters are ok, young and full of life.

Agree that it was a bit boring. No excitement involved. No suspense. Doesn't flow very well. Many grammatical errors.

I think it was good :)

I think there's plenty of potential here. You should continue the story and take the comments as small hints not people trash talking your story. And please continue this story

I think it was great I was all into it but wherez the rest?

Fuck you need an editor!

I agree editor needed desperately asap

Despite what these losers said I think your story was great. I loved the story line. The hell with these haters. Who in the hell is paying attention to the grammatical errors. Sooooo what, is that gonna hinder your imagination to run its course? Go figure. Focus more on what's going on here and just enjoy the story. No body is forcing your English teacher asses to read it.

This story is a masterpiece

Short chapter. Hope more happens as this was just kind of set-up. I can see how some think it seems a bit child-like but I interpret it to be Romeo’s youth and shyness.