by toddstop
To hit the shower and visualize having the cum pounded out of me. Good story -- I am so horny right now. The making out with the cocks smashing against each other, light kisses, hard kisses, constant friction on that trigger spot -- thanks as you' re making me cum........
Another tale that made my computer combust! I love how what the reader and the character expects isn't what happens. Great writing and I wait to read any new chapters you will post.
I like the way you write....enough detail to make it hot, but not wasting time getting things going. Had me hard through the whole thing. Can't wait to read more from you.
I loved this and your writing style is poetic. :-) I'm really looking forward to reading more of your work.
Happy Writing :-)
Love reading your stories on Lit and Nifty. You are very talented. I agree that your mix of poetic, flowing writing style mixed with some hardcore pounding translates to a very "happy ending" for me...lol. Don't ever stop, Toddstop!
I'm big fan of this story. Seriously, one of the best I have red in a while. Keep writing, you're really good!!
This is a fantastic story. It’s perfect proof of how a story is superior to a DVD. However hot the guys on film were, however good their acting, no porn movie could capture the sexual intensity and passion of this super-hot story. I was there with them as I read it, first playing one part, then the other – each time cumming loads. Perfection.
Very, very well done. Excellent writing, transitions, descriptions....very hot, erotic, and sexy!
Keep it up. You're a helluva writer!
hot, really hot. great story that reminded me of those hetero MILF/virgin boy toy stories. but much, much better. you should write a 2nd chapter.
awesome story, made me shoot a load.... keep up the great writing, would love to see a part 2
What's with these hairy guys who want to trim their chest hair? Let is grow in all its glory! I've seen many roofers with gorgeous hairy chests glowing in the daily sunshine. Keep the chest hair -- it adds to the sexy appearance!
This was incredible. Love the bait and switch over who is topping who. Versatility is so hot.