All Comments on 'Room 715'

This story has a lot of potential moving forward. Let’s make something out of it.

The story is good but the sex scene is way too short. It wastes the sexy build up.

What did Kim do next? Go back to Max, who seems to be a loser, the one she works to keep? Or find out more about the stranger (and his blonde woman), what's his name and what does he do? Keep us posted.

This is my first story, so I am glad you liked it. I have some ideas of where to take Kim's story, so hopefully I will be posting more.

Such a wonderful beginning for a single story OR a series, which I would view as a better use of this great tidbit. Flirtacious server by day seeking fulfillment in a series of one niters or a series of casual relationships. Let us know what you decide for Kim.