All Comments on 'Room-mates Ch. 1-4'

Love the way mike was seduced into the whole ordeal.

i have seen this story before sum where ( i think i was on the nifty site )

i have seen this story on nifty before

yes this story was posted on nifty as well as a few others.

It was the first story I ever posted. And remains one of my faves.

The story was hot, your technique was not. You are having difficulty posting dialogue smoothly as well as transitioning from one segment to another.

Yeah. You're writing jerk off johnies. Take the time to write good jerk off johnies, will you? You've got the talent, put in the work.

It was gay, and well... gay. I have no doubt in my mind that you are lonely, because you must have read countless other erotic stories, hence where you got this idea, but dude, stick to what you know: jacking off.

fantastic and beautifully done...don't forget you promised a sequel, write quickly.

want to know what happens......