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'I'll do that and set up a schedule so you know. I'm a pretty organized person.' I looked at her. She was a pretty sexy person too, and she behaved as if she was the homeliest girl in Cow County, like no-one had ever told her she was a fuckin' knock-out. I mentally added a Saturday gym session to my schedule. A little distraction might be welcome. I thought about calling Ellen too, finding out if she was handling the boonies OK.
'A schedule huh? Way organized, Susan. You wanna practice drinking a beer, or you gonna stick to coke?' She pinked up again.
'Oh, I gotta ton of work, Mr. Taylor... uh, Doug, but thanks anyway.' She scuttled away and I picked my book up again. Young and serious and fulla plans. Probably a real hard worker. Glad I never been one of those.
More on Doug the slacker and his wasted talent soon.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoI have a difficult time believing that college educated characters all speak like such hillbillies. The "I ain't got"'s, "you done good"'s, and such are getting a tad annoying. If you're going to make your characters speak with such horrible grammar and pronunciation to the point that its hard to follow their train of thought, at least preface/justfy it somehow with a prologue. For a main character who supposedly studies so much as to get A's and B's, it's hard to believe that he speaks like a hillbilly who only made it to 8th grade. No offense to hillbillies.
Anonymousover 16 years agoI'm a sucker for romantic seductions and I loved this one. It was well worth reading through 3 chapters. I love Doug's voice.
Anonymousover 17 years agoI like this story, I have to admit, it was a little hard to get in to, I thought that I had been reading longer than just 2-3 days. Really just got in to it today.. good writing, keep going. I look forward to next chapter.
been so long have forgotten my sign in name...oh well
Anonymousover 17 years agoGood story, I'm really enjoying the series, but I prefer it when the voices of the characters are a little less similar - the narrator's dirty drawling monologues blurred a little with the girl's voice in this one. Not a huge deal, though :)
