All Comments on 'Roommate Relations Ch. 06'

The behaviors between the characters are quite believable and naughty. Well written - do write more. I'd been eagerly waiting for the next installment and was not disappointed. Nice work!

Please add more of where jess finally leaves that kyle. he does not even have the decency to try and get fit for jess. He just lets himself go. ian and jess make a fantastic couple . very good writing.

Please write more about jess and ian

Thanks, everyone - I'm glad you enjoy my stories. I've just submitted the next chapter of BMOC, and then I've got an all-new story in the works, as well as the (final, probably) chapter of this story.

That 'caveman' stuff was hot. Love how you have Ian just manhandle her like that. I think you should consider Kyle finding out next time by seeing them through Ian's slightly opened door. It would be hot to see you write it from Kyles point of view (watching them fuck). Maybe he even gets hot watching them....

Please continue with this because I can't wait for the next chapter!

PLEASE continue this!! I LOVED IT!! I need more!! PLEASE?!

I love this story so much!!! It's my absolute favorite and I've read it about 10 times!! Please upload more!!

Love the story, when will the next chapter be online?

The next chapter is in progress, but slow going - I have other projects as well.

They're so bad and so into it and that's fucking hot!

Looking forward to the next chapter. Breaking up would just be scandalous :D

Beyond hot--and so well written.

I came soooooo hard! my pussy is completely soaked and so are my sheets - hope to read the next chapter really soon XOXO

Any update to this? How much longer do we have to wait for another masterpiece?

Keep writing you are fantastic

This is a great story, please update soon!! XD

Can't wait for the next installment!!

The final part is in progress, as it has been for some time. It will, I think, be impressive.

Any more updates?

Updates?

I am writing the last scene right now; with a bit of luck I'll have it done by the end of next week.

How is it coming along? Are u getting time to finish it ?

Updates?

waiting with anticipation for next chapter!!

Hard at work on it. I was hoping to have it done in April, but as ever real life intervenes. Working on the last scene, and it's turning out to be a sort of dichotomy paradox situation, but progress is being made.

Great to hear. Looking forward to it!!

Hope it's going well. Very interested to read the next installment.

Two days and it'll have been a year since this was posted. Any chance of an update soon? I understand real life gets in the way and all that, but any chance at all?

You speak the truth, anon. So here's the deal: I finished the last chapter today, and sent it off to the person who initially inspired the story. Now I'm waiting for her feedback, and if she likes it I'll be submitting to the site.

...aaaand submitted. Should be appearing here in a few days.

you do that to me and i'll bury you both alive

Okay I totally get this is a fantasy spank story so realism isn't a big thing-but a big problem with the realism on the opposite end of the most frequent criticism: ian would be bored at this point, and their constant constant 'dirty talk' just comes off as totally removed from reality, a guy in ians position simply doesnt do that, and if that's not apparent, you've never been in that situation in the real world. This is a more glaring sore thumb than any of the walking over kyle.

Please stop...this is awful! .5*