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Ian sat down beside her and she curled up against him, there on the floor beside Kyle's bed. Some of his cum wound up smeared on his broad chest, but neither of them cared. Jess let out a small purr as she nestled into the crook of his arm. "I'm going to be walking funny tomorrow," she said.
"Think sleepy over there will notice?" Ian asked, nodding toward the still-unconscious Kyle.
"He never has before." Then they sat together in silence for some time, recuperating from their torrid encounter.
Jess was the first to break the silence. "I guess I should clean up before he comes to," she said, regretfully.
"I guess," Ian replied. "Or you could come next door with me and leave him."
Jess's heart quickened. She looked up at Ian, eyes shining. When she spoke, her voice quavered slightly. "Did you mean leave him for the night... or leave him for good?"
It seemed like a lifetime before Ian gave her his reply.
"Both."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoOkay I totally get this is a fantasy spank story so realism isn't a big thing-but a big problem with the realism on the opposite end of the most frequent criticism: ian would be bored at this point, and their constant constant 'dirty talk' just comes off as totally removed from reality, a guy in ians position simply doesnt do that, and if that's not apparent, you've never been in that situation in the real world. This is a more glaring sore thumb than any of the walking over kyle.
TripleLalmost 10 years agoAuthorYou speak the truth, anon. So here's the deal: I finished the last chapter today, and sent it off to the person who initially inspired the story. Now I'm waiting for her feedback, and if she likes it I'll be submitting to the site.
