by sebastiando
equal parts adorable and hot. in a very large glass. love them! hotly hilarious. cannot wait for them to fuck.
GOod, but you have to shorten paragraphs. I think one of them must have been 3/4 of a standard page. You can split it easily even when talking about the same topic. Quotes must start a new line if the speaker changes also. You can have the speaker quote the person in a paragraph though.
HOT in the end
I am really happy with this chapter because I was unsure if Sebastian was going to take advantage of Rory or not, but he made the right decision. I can't wait for the next chapter to see what they decide.
i`m just so addicted to this storyline. it is so well written and the characters are just so loveable, esp rory. i absolutely love it :)