All Comments on 'Rory and Sebastian Ch. 08'

by sebastiando

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GobletHolly182GobletHolly182almost 12 years ago
:) young love = fucking your curfew to blow your man

equal parts adorable and hot. in a very large glass. love them! hotly hilarious. cannot wait for them to fuck.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

GOod, but you have to shorten paragraphs. I think one of them must have been 3/4 of a standard page. You can split it easily even when talking about the same topic. Quotes must start a new line if the speaker changes also. You can have the speaker quote the person in a paragraph though.

HOT in the end

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Good Job

I am really happy with this chapter because I was unsure if Sebastian was going to take advantage of Rory or not, but he made the right decision. I can't wait for the next chapter to see what they decide.

ciara668913ciara668913almost 12 years ago

Love everything about this story can't wate to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Dying

Need. More. Now.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Excellent

I LOVE THIS STORY FIVE STARS FOR YOU*****

GabrielClarkGabrielClarkabout 11 years ago

i`m just so addicted to this storyline. it is so well written and the characters are just so loveable, esp rory. i absolutely love it :)

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